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读郁达夫“苟活人间再十年”句有感,和之

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发表于 2009-9-28 00:02:23 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<div class="articleContent" id="articleBody"><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px;">毁家蹈海岂偶然,遗恨南洋有遗篇。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: ZH-Cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-Us; mso-bidi-language: Ar-sA;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px;">几许风流才子事,天生不教见衰年。</font></span></p></div><!--Element not supported - Type: 8 Name: #comment-->
 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-4 11:25:44 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>离垢居</i>在2009-10-2 19:23:50的发言:</b><br/><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px;">毁家蹈海岂偶然,遗恨南洋有遗篇。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font size="5">一般情况下,是以第五字平声来补救为常见。如:一身报国有万死,双鬓向人无再青。南朝四百八十寺,多少楼劝烟雨中。</font></span></p></div><p>谢谢!</p>
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发表于 2009-9-28 10:04:30 | 显示全部楼层
竟然如此不讲究哈<img alt="" src="http://www.jiangyouss.cn/Skins/default/topicface/face17.gif"/>
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发表于 2009-9-29 11:00:13 | 显示全部楼层
<p>进来问声好</p>
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 楼主| 发表于 2009-10-1 21:44:13 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>浔阳倦客</i>在2009-9-28 10:04:30的发言:</b><br/>竟然如此不讲究哈<img alt="" src="http://www.jiangyouss.cn/Skins/default/topicface/face17.gif"/></div><p>岂偶然,是出律,有遗篇,已补救之。</p>
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发表于 2009-10-2 19:23:50 | 显示全部楼层
<p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font style="FONT-SIZE: 24px;">毁家蹈海岂偶然,遗恨南洋有遗篇。</font></span></p><p><span style="FONT-SIZE: 10.5pt; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-hansi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-fareast-language: zh-cn; mso-ascii-font-family: 'times new roman'; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ansi-language: en-us; mso-bidi-language: ar-sa;"><font size="5">一般情况下,是以第五字平声来补救为常见。如:一身报国有万死,双鬓向人无再青。南朝四百八十寺,多少楼台烟雨中。</font></span></p>
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发表于 2009-10-4 18:00:41 | 显示全部楼层
拗救非法,倦客、绿烟之言是。
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