五律·秋夜自遣

风过苍筠

<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; tab-stops: 2.0cm;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">钟响敲寒漏，更深奈若何？</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">人闲寻梦短，客久赋诗多。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">绮墨重重落，清愁点点磨。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><br/></span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-ascii-font-family: &#718;&#805;; mso-hansi-font-family: &#718;&#805;;">细闻风和雨，似为我吟歌。</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: &#718;&#805;; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt;"><p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p>

皎月

大姐进一层次了[em23]

鄱湖渔歌

<p>恩,这手是不错</p>

一得愚生

这首不错&nbsp;惟首句意象稍旧

风过苍筠

<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>一得愚生</i>在2007-1-29 10:45:47的发言：</b><br/>这首不错&nbsp;惟首句意象稍旧 </div><p></p>谢老师鼓励。老师所言极是，意向是陈旧了，待我有新句后，将其替换下来。