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仰齋老眉批拙作,詩以拜謝

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发表于 2007-1-16 10:47:50 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">摇窗灯影</span><span lang="ZH-TW" style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-fareast-language: ZH-TW;">絕</span><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">尘埃,若见斯翁劳案台。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">腑底箴言呵冻写,诗中境界为人开。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">儒风早已倾多士,膏泽居然到散才。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"><span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;; mso-hansi-font-family: &quot;Times New Roman&quot;;">欲报青眸真愧我,心香一瓣托新梅。</span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt;"></p></span><br/>
发表于 2007-1-16 12:34:44 | 显示全部楼层
2,3句逼真,似见其景。
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发表于 2007-1-16 13:28:11 | 显示全部楼层
<p>此诗脉络悬线亦犹可把.</p>
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发表于 2007-1-18 08:38:52 | 显示全部楼层
<span style="FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-ascii-font-family: 'mso-hansi-font-family:';">儒风早已倾多士,膏泽居然到散才。</span>
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发表于 2007-1-18 19:52:18 | 显示全部楼层
附议红叶,很逼真。
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