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[转帖]《梦冰诗词》序

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发表于 2007-4-1 10:36:31 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
<p align="center" style="MARGIN: 12pt 0cm; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">《</span><span style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">梦冰诗词<span lang="EN-US">》</span>序</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: 黑体; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;">&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">
                        <p></p></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p align="center" style="MARGIN: 12pt 0cm; TEXT-ALIGN: center;"><font face="宋体, MS Song"><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">熊盛元</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 9pt; COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: arial;">
                                        <p></p></span></font></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: arial; mso-ascii-font-family: 黑体; mso-fareast-font-family: 黑体;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</span><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体; mso-hansi-font-family: arial; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp; </span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">丙戌仲春,薄寒侵袂。枯坐窗前,怅咏李义山<span lang="EN-US">"</span>紫府仙人号宝灯,云浆未饮结成冰。如何雪月交光夜,更在瑶台十二层<span lang="EN-US">"</span>之诗,不觉悠然神往。当此之际,尘心顿尽,鄙吝俱消。一缕吟魂,似游于姑射山中,不知今世何世也。怔忡恍惚之间,蓦闻手机铃响,开屏视之,则吾赣弋阳梦冰所发信息,谓诗将付梓,嘱余为序。我于梦冰,未尝谋面,本欲婉拒,转思其名含一<span lang="EN-US">"</span>冰<span lang="EN-US">"</span>字,正合方才所吟义山诗境,岂冥冥中与渠有此一段诗缘乎?遂慨然而承命焉。</span></font></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"></span></font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;">&nbsp;</span></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">余观夫梦冰诗词,颇饶逸怀浩气,有司空表圣<span lang="EN-US">"</span>天风浪浪,海山苍苍。真力弥满,万象在旁<span lang="EN-US">"</span>之概。如<span lang="EN-US">"</span>鱼鹰潭水传清韵,龙虎山风弄古玄<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>奉和张炜吟长《七十闲吟》<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>黄鹤白云天浩浩,犹凭风雨辨金声<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>幸与涂先雍先生相聚<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>遥看仙桥云吐月,苍松碧浪听笙歌<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>寄周吉老先生<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>山中埋头庄周梦,词里畅游精卫飞<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>步韵寄酬熊老耘涛<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>入地观天得灵气,沧桑古木换新天<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>观叶建辉根艺展得句<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>凌空直下鹰搏兔,高古弘今横百川<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>致孟老繁锦代会长<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>一线天中窥日月,仙桥顶上望穹苍<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>欣闻贵溪开发城南<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>借他龙虎山中气,大写腾蛟起凤篇<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>七绝<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>巨龙搁浅何时出,还我青天万古流<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>无题<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)</span>、<span lang="EN-US">"</span>奔势如雷同紫电,龙潭碧水漾宏图<span lang="EN-US">"(&lt;</span>龙潭沟吟<span lang="EN-US">&gt;)......</span>或雄浑轩举,或妙想凝神,或时空交织,或气势磅礴,指出向上一路,使人胸襟开阔。诚如袁子才所云<span lang="EN-US">"</span>汤汤来潮,缕缕腾烟。有馀于物,物自浮焉<span lang="EN-US">"</span>!此类佳句,<span lang="EN-US">&lt;</span>梦冰诗词<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>中俯拾皆是,无须一一枚举也。<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <p></p></span></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font size="3">尤可贵者,梦冰不惟具此逸怀,亦每多沉潜之思,如<span lang="EN-US">&lt;</span>赠汪伦<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>:</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</font></span><font size="3">莫笑汪伦欺太白,求诗也算性情人。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;</font></span><font size="3">可怜当世罕知己,泪落花香坠暮春。<span lang="EN-US">
                                        <p></p></span></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font size="3">全诗语浅而慨深,格高而境窈,盖唐诗所以繁荣,在于虽不识字者亦知敬重诗人;而当今则传统诗词门庭冷落,诗人知己寥寥,<span lang="EN-US">"</span>泪落花香坠暮春<span lang="EN-US">"</span>,非仅梦冰一己之叹,亦众多诗词爱好者之共同心声也!又如<span lang="EN-US">&lt;</span>清水湖</font><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US">&gt;:<br/>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span>清波宁静见风姿,水漾青山碧影驰。</font><span lang="EN-US"><br/><font size="3">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </font></span><font size="3">湖上泛舟多画意,心随九曲忘归时。<span lang="EN-US">
                                        <p></p></span></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;"><font size="3">尘寰既罕知己,所亲者惟青山碧水耳。此诗心与物契,恬淡清闲,然细加品味,<span lang="EN-US">"</span>清波宁静见风姿,水漾青山碧影驰<span lang="EN-US">"</span>二句,实含陈简斋<span lang="EN-US">"</span>微波喜摇人,小立待其定<span lang="EN-US">"</span>之意,句隽蕴深,颇耐循诵。王夫之尝云:<span lang="EN-US">"</span>情景名为二,而实不可离。神于诗者,妙合无垠。<span lang="EN-US">"</span>梦冰殆深明其旨乎!<span lang="EN-US">
                                        <p></p></span></font></span></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; </span><span style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">梦冰于倚声撰联,亦颇擅长,观其<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp;&lt;</span>满庭芳<span lang="EN-US">&nbsp; </span>吟别永康<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>词及<span lang="EN-US">&lt;</span>翠碧轩嵌字联<span lang="EN-US">&gt;</span>,均见巧思与才情。然总体而言,似以诗更见风韵,而绝尤胜于律。稍可憾者,《梦冰诗词》中不收古风,终嫌体式未能兼备耳。此固青年诗人普遍倾向,似不必求全责备也。“苟日新,又日新,日日新。”梦冰富于春秋,假以岁月,定多历练,吾知其前途必不可限量也!是为序。<span lang="EN-US">
                                        <p></p></span></span></font></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p></p><p align="right" style="MARGIN-BOTTOM: 12pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 16pt; TEXT-ALIGN: right; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><font size="3"><span lang="EN-US" style="COLOR: black; FONT-FAMILY: 宋体; mso-bidi-font-family: arial;">&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp;<chsdate wst="on" isrocdate="False" islunardate="False" day="15" month="3" year="2006"></chsdate><chsdate></chsdate>2006<span lang="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US">年3</span></span><span lang="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US">月15</span></span><span lang="EN-US"><span lang="EN-US">日</span></span><chsdate></chsdate><chsdate></chsdate><span lang="EN-US">于南昌青山湖畔</span></span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-FAMILY: 华文宋体;"><font face="宋体, MS Song">&nbsp;</font></span></font></p>
发表于 2007-4-1 13:46:32 | 显示全部楼层
歡迎!掛起示衆:)
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-1 17:55:35 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢<a title="作者资料" href="http://www.jiangyouss.com/dispuser.asp?name=一得愚生" target="_blank"><font color="#000000">一得愚生</font></a>老师,但我在栏目里找不到这个帖子呀!??
发表于 2007-4-1 18:07:19 | 显示全部楼层
<p>欢迎!</p><p></p>
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-1 20:57:33 | 显示全部楼层
<div class="msgheader">QUOTE:</div><div class="msgborder"><b>以下是引用<i>草啸</i>在2007-4-1 18:07:19的发言:</b><br/><p>欢迎!</p><p></p></div><p>谢谢!愿我们加强合作!共同繁荣!</p>
发表于 2008-9-11 08:21:01 | 显示全部楼层
成往者
发表于 2008-9-11 08:35:03 | 显示全部楼层
梦冰富于春秋,假以岁月,定多历练,吾知其前途必不可限量也!是为序。<span lang="EN-US">
                <p>哎!</p></span>
发表于 2013-1-26 09:28:03 | 显示全部楼层
诗如昨,人已杳,默哀
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